Below is a scene I wrote recently. It's part of a larger storyline inspired by a commercial I saw which may someday evolve into a novel, I don't know. For some reason I usually write in a weird form of past tense, but I changed this to present. Sorry if I missed anything and it sounds out of place. Also, a disclaimer: sometimes my characters don't have the same morals that I do, and use language I wouldn't. Just a heads up.
